She’s too much of a woman

She’s too much of a woman. An overthinker who analyses every detail. An incredibly intelligent one. A kind who gives more but expects little. She’s often abused for having such a trait, yet still she remains kind and munificent in her most modest way.

She’s too much of a woman, living a life of drama, but she keeps it to herself so no one knows her enigma. She writes about it instead, cries for it in bed, wipes it off once the pain is dead.

She’s too much of a woman, so she wonders everyday, about the existence of the world in the first place. She’s but a girl with a curious mind. Grew up with books and tons of questions in line. Some got answers, some got none. Still seeking for the rest to be unlocked at the right time.

Now she’s here, standing in front of a man. A man she loves with all sums of her being. A man of trouble she embraced with no ceiling. Yes she’s a smart woman, but lucidly stupid in this game she’s playing. Isn’t it ironic? That she’s highly clever but an outright stupid? A woman of class who falls for a narcissistic. A woman this man blames for overanalysing. For too much jealousy and envy, for her bunch of worries and insecurities.

She’s too much of a woman—this is what the man used as an excuse. So he left her ’cause he couldn’t manage her simple rules. Rules of sincere love and undivided attention. Don’t you know that’s what she’s only asking for?

(The digital painting above is an original creation of my boyfriend, Arvy. Special thanks to him for this beautiful piece of art.)

♥️♥️♥️

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      1. Honestly, I can relate to like 90% of it lol but the lines “An overthinker who analyses every detail. An incredibly intelligent one. A kind who gives more but expects little. She’s often abused for having such a trait, yet still she remains kind and munificent in her most modest way” spoke to me the most!

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      2. Aw I’m happy this writing somehow connects to you. I’m honestly an overthinker too but I love it that way like I don’t care what people say lolll 😆

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    1. Hey Jack, ofcourse I do accept this! Thank you for the nomination and for appreciating my posts. Congratulations as well for being nominated three times! That ain’t surprising tho cause I know how great of a writer you are. 😉

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      1. Heyyy, that’s not even a joke because you’re a great writer! Anyway, can I just answer them in the comment section of your post? If that would be fine 😊

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    1. Yeyy!! A pinoy commented! Hihi. Thank youuu. Was kind of describing a side of me except for the last part where she falls for the wrong person 😉

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  1. Man you have talent! Me? In a writing contest with you? I’ve overstepped my boundaries, that’s for sure! Brilliant post, touches my heart. And the artwork is beautiful! Did the ex from San Diego do this or was it someone else?

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    1. Hi George, thank you for reading my work again, it’s my current boyfriend’s painting lol so no 😅 The writing contest 😂😂😂 when will that be anyway?

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  2. Always enjoying your text, very cool description 🙂 I think you’d be good at creating a hero or character :))
    The painting of your boyfriend is just WOW! No words, and I won’t be able to draw like this… nope, never :))

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    1. Hi Victoria! Thank you for appreciating this piece and my boyfriend’s painting. Will show him your comment, he’ll surely like it 😁 this is so touching btw. Thanks a bunch 💙😘

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  3. Nice image and writing. I guess people sometimes want complexity over simplicity and yet some want simplicity over complexity. The simple rules may really confuse the one not able to embrace them. 🙂

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