The Psychoweirdo’s charm

Ben was bewildered by the silent scene he just witnessed right before his very eyes. It almost felt like he’s in a movie wherein two girls are about to fight over him, which made him feel a bit proud of himself, that added some dose of pride and confidence in his Alpha soul. He scratched the daydreaming after realising that this ain’t a movie at all, it was real life. His wife Abby is standing right next to his mistress who happened to be a sin he would never regret of committing. Ash has exceeded the definition of perfection—who is gifted with such undeniably seducing soul, with those brown eyes that speaks of lust, a body that shouts of warmth and home, hair that smells of lilies in full bloom and a sweet voice that mimics of Jazz on a sad solitary night. He must be crazy, he thought. Whatever it is, he knows for a fact that a woman like this is almost impossible to even exist, like a gem that can only be found in the dark abyss of ocean and seas.

“What is going on in here? Abby, let’s go home now, I’ll explain everything…” said Ben, who suddenly dropped the paperbag of Japanese food he bought at Yabu Restaurant as he rapidly reached out for his wife’s hands so he can escort her out of the house. But he reckoned it’s not possible, with Abby’s face that threatens of a quick death, by the way her features instantly transformed in mere seconds. A pair of fire emojis replaced her once angelic eyes, at least to his imagination, that made him sweat like he just lifted a 300 lbs of weights, non-stop.

Abby slightly moved back from her standing position as she peered at Ben with sheer rage, then she shoo him away in the most brutal way possible, as he attempts to hold her and lead her out of the house.

“No, i need explanation NOW!!! You fuckin’ tell me what’s going on and why the fuck are you cheating with me and how long has this been going on?!??! Fuckin’ tell me ’cause I fuckin’ deserve to know!!!!!” she stated hysterically, losing all the poise a legal wife should have. She just lost it, she couldn’t help it.

Ash nonchalantly held and opened up her tiny jar by the coffee table that contains sweets and gums and grabbed a strawberry flavored gum she calmly put into her mouth, as she watches this familiar boring movie that’s making her nearly sleepy. She crossed her arms in front of her and leaned her back against the wall as she chews and pops the gum in her mouth, in a sexy manner every man would absolutely get turned on, even just on the chewing act alone. The Psychoweirdo didn’t say a word—her presence is enough to overrule the heated ambiance these overly dramatic Asian people created in her place. Fuck off, she thought.

Ben tried to carry his petite wife like a child, regardless of her violent protest with the act, scandalous cussing and crazy shouting. Notwithstanding Abby’s size, she was able to get off of him as she scratched him hard with her witch-like long nails and as she bit his arm that left a mark that is almost about to bleed. She didn’t wanna lose, no matter how ridiculous the scene she’s creating, she didn’t mind. She needs an answer, Ben needs to choose between her and this whore.

“OK! I will leave this filthy house, but you have to choose between me or your mistress. Tell me, who would you pick? Your wife who have loved you for years or this bitch you barely know?! Tell me! Fuckin’ decide NOW!” she threatened Ben, whilst pointing to Ash, confident enough that he’s going to choose her, ’cause she’s the legal wife, the right owner of Ben.

Ash wasn’t bothered by the wife’s threat, she cared less about losing Ben, but she knows she was the best in bed, by far. She’s thinking hard as she looks at Ben, trying to send a captivating message through her eyes—to stay and choose her. She’s not sure yet, but she wants to be chosen, perhaps it was her ego or maybe it was also because she was truly hooked by this guy’s inexplicable hotness.

Ben didn’t know how to reply, he’s both shocked and frightened. What is he supposed to do now?

To be continued…

24 Comments

  1. I think her caring about his hotness slightly ruins the character for me, her only motivation as you’ve built her should be that she’s better than the wife. Other than that, great dramatic scene keeping up with the strong characters. This Ben loses either way as his wife will resent him or he’ll lose her completely.

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    1. Apple Rae says:

      Oh you think so? Being a psychopath, I think Ash doesn’t really understand her own set of emotions, if she really cares or if it’s purely lust. We’ll see on the next parts hehe. Thanks for the comment, as always Lucas. And thanks for taking the time to read ☺️

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      1. I never thought that maybe she isn’t as in control as she thinks she is. You’re even building character when replying to comments, nicely done.

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      2. Apple Rae says:

        Yea most of the time psychopaths have a hard time understanding their own emotions and how to respond to it, based on what I’ve read so far and my own analysis of the condition. Thank you tho 😉

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  2. George F. says:

    Great scene! You’ve done your research on psychopath’s who truly don’t understand (or even have) emotions of their own…so they’re not effected by emotional drama! This is a perfect description of how a psychopath WOULD react: ” She crossed her arms in front of her and leaned her back against the wall as she chews and pops the gum in her mouth, in a sexy manner every man would absolutely get turned on, even just on the chewing act alone.” I love this weirdo. If Ben choses her, she’s going to dump him fast for a better guy (they’re around every corner…) and he’s going to regret it!

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    1. Apple Rae says:

      Haha you just read my mind! I’m thinking of the same thing! Lol. Thanks George. I had to keep up especially now that Akira’s demonic level has reached that of Medusa’s, how can I even beat that? Lol.

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      1. George F. says:

        BTW, the wife throwing “hissy fits” was perfect too! Keep it coming! Psychoweirdo’s cold detachment is the perfect counterpoint to Akira’s medusa like evil! Great job!!

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      2. Apple Rae says:

        Good point!! Yay, thank youuu. Notify me once a new post about Akira is up yea? Ima sleep now, good morning there i guess? 😅

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      3. George F. says:

        Sleep tight. Gonna be a few posts between the next Akira post…the story must go on…love you’re weirdo!

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  3. Jokerswild says:

    Wow, the story is building and it’s getting interesting. I feel it can go many ways as of right now because the relationship right now seems salvageable but yet so broken. If a wife has to ask her husband to choose, she should hope he wouldn’t choose her, that way she could move on with her life and search for true happiness. Seems this Ben character has a complex that will surely come back to bite him because Ash seems like a trophy collector to me, not someone to settle down. Psycho weirdo seems like a conqueror, there’s only one card in the deck that trumps a King and it always has a psycho smile🃏! She seems like she just wants to take him just to show she can and in the end, he’ll lose. That’s how minds work, you’re knocking this out the park lovely, keep it up!!❤️🌹

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    1. Apple Rae says:

      Love this comment! Yes, she’s not a keeper, apparently lol but there’s more to know about Psychoweirdo that I wanted to reveal on the next chapters—the why she’s become what she is and what she REALLY is in the first place. You’re right about Ben and the wife! I hope you keep on reading the next parts of this story, Roy. Thankssss ♥️

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      1. Jokerswild says:

        Yeah, it’s getting really interesting! And did you say you hope I keep reading? Lol!!! Wow, somewhere out there a deck of cards is missing the Joker! Very funny lovely😂, why wouldn’t I keep reading ❤️.

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  4. So will Ben choose between monogamous monotony or psychoweirdo’s sensual psychopathy?

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    1. Apple Rae says:

      Haha well I guess Ben wants both lol

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    2. Apple Rae says:

      I’ll reveal on the next post ☺️

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  5. Bartek D says:

    I feel sorry for Ben, I can imagine pissing himself from fear in the doorway, and I’m guessing no matter which girl he chooses he won’t keep her for long. BTW I love the way you described her voice.

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    1. Apple Rae says:

      Haha you’re right. Ben loses either way. Thank you! ☺️

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  6. Well Done again 🙂 interesting…what gonna happen with our Ben at the end :))

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    1. Apple Rae says:

      Thank you Ray. I hope you read the next part to find out 😉

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  7. Enni says:

    Wow wow wow …… B#tch alert 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂I’m enjoying it .

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    1. Apple Rae says:

      Thank you Enni. I hope I could write about Psychoweirdo again, she’s been quite silent in my mind lately…

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      1. Enni says:

        Awwwww I’m looking forward for her next action …. She is something more than she can think of ….

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